How's My Driving?

Am I deviating too far from Canon Dean? Am I doing anything wrong grammatically, or being unflattering to the character? Is my concept whacked? Any compliments, complaints, constructive criticism, or cupcakes go here! I promise to take all of them seriously.

Except the cupcakes. Those are adorable.

Thread Tracking!

Guess who's gonna stalk mojofree's journal and shoplift the convenient archives he's made? They'll be as linear as possible!

Dean catches some guy breaking into his and Cas's apartment. - With runawaybrother (Ordinary!Gabe)
He finds a letter in Sam's jacket and decides enough is enough. Time to get his baby brother clean.
Cas should really learn to shut his door. Adult content and shameless shamelessness.
A little bit of napping on Cas. Totally nothing wrong with that right? - on DreamWidth
Dean and Cas get into a fight, because Dean can be an asshole and so can his boyfriend.
Some naughty shower times. Adult content and shameless fluff.
Shit goes down and also there's a hurricane. Also an uncomfortable bathtub.
Oh, that's right, they're dating now, he's allowed to do not-so-public displays of affection.
Guess who got a dog, bitch? - With Colt (Who should really get his own journal.)
Catching Sam stoned on a park bench wasn't the way he planned on spending his day. 
So, turns out he's kinda falling for his roommate, and clearly that means he should move out. Or kiss him. Whatevs.
Keep Dean away from the whiskey, please, he'll just sob like a girl.
Turns out Cas's 'business trip' was more like 'bullshit trip'.
Sammy stops in for a visit. - With milesfromfine
Didn't mean to eat your sandwich, my roommate bro, allow me to take you out for breakfastlunch. - DreamWidth
The very beginning- Dean needs to rent an apartment, and some hippy guy needs a room. - With mojofree

Random Texts with no particular place on the timeline

Cas's stoned list
Cas's strippers- he tends to drunktext, doesn't he?